J’aimerais solliciter votre aide à propos d’un e-mail que je dois renvoyer pour l’obtention du whv. J’ai indiqué avoir commis un délit, lequel étant d’avoir été reconnu coupable d’avoir conduit sous l’emprise d’un état alcoolique. Je ne sais pas si je suis toujours réellement éligible au whv, mais on me demande tout de même de renvoyer un e-email pour donner plus d’information à propos du dit délit. Mon niveau d’anglais étant bien médiocre, j’ai tenté de rédiger au mieux, bien que ce soit assez laborieux. Si quelqu’un voulait bien jeter un coup d’œil au fautes de grammaire et de conjugaison entre autres, voir me donner quelques conseils ou idées pour améliorer mes chances d’aller un jour en Oz.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I was convicted for drink driving the 22 July, 2012. We were celebrating a birthday and I did a stupid thing: I took the car to go back at home. I knew I had drank some alcohol, but I thought that I was good for drive. Police officers were in control cars between my home and friend’s apartment, and I was controlled positive to the alcohol. I was convicted to pay a fine of 300€ and an internship of a road safety awareness. This is the only time where I had to deal with justice, and it is also the only time I drive after drinking alcohol. I understood my fault.
If I want to go in Australia, it’s for disorient me, to see beautiful landscapes, meet new people, another culture. I feel the need to begin a new adventure. I know some people who went in Australia, and all are back with stars in their eyes. It’s for this I want to go in Australia, and also a few for progress in english because I think I need it.
Best regards.
, le il y a 10 années et 11 mois.
